Taya and Gracie walked in to the forest when they where playing hide and seek Gracie heard foot steps so Gracie said come on let’s go deeper into the forest. Once they got deeper into the forest there was a ding like a car alarm going off. Taya said not this again nick trying to expose us as they where at friends house nick yelled there here NO!! They ran all the way to there friend Lara’s drive way as it’s a long way. They decided to walk a long way Oh no we ended up at KMART.OH NO WHY!!!!!!
Taya,
I was getting worried when the friends went deeper into the forest. I did not know what would happen. You broke the tension with the ending.
Keep writing.
Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA
Thank you Mrs.G